Alien Loves Predator Contest Entry

I really enjoy reading Alien Loves Predator. Who would have thought that an alien and a predator living in New York trying to live a normal life could be so funny? Anyhow, the creator had a contest where readers were supposed to come up with the dialogue for a strip. I thought this would be the perfect time to give doing an online strip a try. This could be my trial run. If you think it's funny, please encourage me. If you don't, make sure you tell me so that I don't waste my time writing an online strip that'll suck. Ok, here it is: